Assalamualaikum Wr.Wb.
Hello friends let me introduce myself , my name is Ivan Hendriawan but you can call me Ivan. I'm 18 years old , I was born in Tulungagung, 25 November 1995.
I live at Jl. Recobarong LK.07 RT01/RW02 Ngunut, Tulungagung (post code 66292)
and now i'm studying in Electronic Engineering Polytechnic Institute of Surabaya (EEPIS).
Well , now i will introduce my family , I have Father and his name is Sucpto Adi
and my mother's name is Sri Utami , My Father's Job is a Driver in PT.Siantar Top and my
mother is housewife , I have young sister too ,her name is Putri Novi Rahmadani , now she is
studying at Elementary School of Ngunut 4
Okay, I have ideal body . I'm about 165 cm high with a weight of 54 Kg , my blood type
is B+ , my hobby is football and reading novel. I have a black and short hair , and I have dark
brown skin , I graduated from Vocational High School 3 Boyolangu.
Well, I think enough of my introduction , thank you for seeing my blog and if there is
wrong writing please leave comments, and finally I would like to say . .
Wassalamualaikum Wr.Wb.
van, there is a mistake I found in your post. "My mother name is..." supposed to be written "My mother's name is.."
BalasHapusokay robiatul, thanks for your correction, I will be fix my post , ,
Hapushi ivan:D
BalasHapusYour article is nice, but I have little correction "my hobby is football and reading novel." maybe you should change "my hobbies are..."
Hai ivan...you know me?? Of course you know. Hahaha. I am hamdan your classmate. Your article is nice, but if you want to say about your adress dont use "street" but stay use "jalan". If you want to know why, you must give me 10 thousand rupiah, and then I will tell you about it. Hahaha Okay.
BalasHapushamdan :) , wherever you are always making laughing .. dita kw 2 :D
HapusOh, hamdan your correction is very good but it is better if you write word "adress" into "dress", oh sorry I mean, "address!" :D peace bro
Hapusivaaaan !!
BalasHapusmaybe i have little correct . maybe you can simply write
" I have fairly ideal body " into" i have the ideal body "
thanks :)
Hallo Van, i don't know if you have a brown eyes colour..
BalasHapusyour mother's name same like my mother.. Are we a "putra yang tertukar"?
hahahh
ivaaaan, I have cousin who work in PT. Siantar Top too. haha
BalasHapusI like your article, especially when you tell about your address. it's so complete I think haha
Hi ivan, maybe i just like your article! I don't have any argument to comment your article because your other friends already give her or his argument to comment your article. Thank you
BalasHapusour clasmate are carefully. i can not find incorrect sentances, but they can find.
BalasHapusassalamualaikum ivan... i want to correct your articel, maybe you can replace the word " I graduated...." become, "I have graduated..., maybe more true.. okey..
BalasHapusHai Ivan,Your article is good,but you must introduce about your self
BalasHapusmaybe all the comment before my commet have fix all the bad sentence or word for your article. but this is nice :)
BalasHapus